Dragonweyr Station

Because the chart I found was wrong I think. XD
I'll get her weight changed, though I did want her to be a bit on the scrawny/wiry side for her build.

Weight added

I approve of him as an apprentice.

I like her, you have a little spelling error in her ambitions and dreams section. Otherwise you know I approve of her.

Name - Kailu Gender - female DOB – 3/6 Age - 19 Location- Fort Drago Personality – Feisty and blunt and with very firm opinions, she rarely hesitates to speak her mind. This leads her into quite a bit of trouble that she might otherwise have avoided with even a tiny bit of tactfulness. She isn't mea...

Read and understood. I tend to like to offer a review of my thoughts on a character after a careful read through, even when everything is technically all up to par. I know I like constructive criticism on my characters so I can make them the best they can be. Hopefully this comes across as intended,...

Tell me more about her pirating and time as a soldier please! How was she orphaned? What circumstances lead her to undercover work? Basically I would like to see more history from this lady. She seems like she could be a really interesting character, but her personality needs a few more details to i...

I would like to see a few more things in the likes and dislikes section. I also want to see more in his history section. Tell me some important things that happened to him in his childhood with his brother. Tell me more about this fever he had. Expand on his time training as a woodsmith. Maybe work ...

I would really like to see his history expanded on a bit. Tell me more about how he strained his voice. Does he miss the Harper hall? Why did he decide to go to the smith craft after that? What was the incident where he hurt his knee? I'd also like to see a bit about his childhood with his brother i...

A good start, but I'd like to see a bit more in her history section. Perhaps a bit more detail about the sort of things she has tried to do to find a place she fits? Also this bit in the hobbies section "Slightly OCD, wants everything in it's place, and prefers to keep things tidy." I thin...