Dragonweyr Station

I would like to see a bit more in her personality.
other then that I approve

I'm open for suggestions on character models

bump for talen or blaze or kitty

Please suggest sj?

I like him. I agree that I like the wording of women, wine AND men

I didn't see any of her likes in her history. I'd like to see an example of her getting even. And a bit more to her personality. There isn't any reference to why she is on/at Pern or how she got here, other then her interest in Enid.

ok

I don't know the proper age for being a jr. journeyman. I'd like to know a bit more about his childhood. And I didn't find the paragraph for his discription. Hair short, long, sticking straight up?

I mostly like this person, but there seems to be something missing... I can't put my finger on it . Maybe its just broken?

P'san of Blue Petroth
S'tar of Blue Osirith

Approved